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[etoile4.livejournal.com]

I tried and I really can't get the lj-cut to work. So instead of filling up your flist with the fic, I'll put up a link to fanfiction.net and update that. If I can get it to work later, I'll update seasonal_spuffy.

Title: Of Frogs and True Love

Rated: PG-13

Author: Etoile

Email- Etoile@soon.com

Summary: Buffy/Spike. During As You Were. Buffy breaks up with Spike before Riley and Sam leave. The actual “doctor” was the Troika. They strike back at the Scoobies after Buffy blew up the eggs. Please review.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Sunnydale or anyone that lives there. They all belong to Joss Whedon

Comments

[zanthinegirl.livejournal.com]

Not sure why you're having trouble with the LJ cut; did you try just then your story? You can get more elaborate, but you don't have to.

Anyway, really cute story. Well written, and fun set up. I love Buffy and the girls as frogs, and Dawn scrubbing her lips is just cute. Looking forward to more!

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure why I'm having trouble either. Maybe LJ hates me.

Thank you very much. I'll have more up soon!

[zanthinegirl.livejournal.com]

Found the new chapter you posted at FF.net-- continues to be deeply cute! It's developing a real plot though; I like the way you handled Angel for example. Dark and glowery; there a little grudgingly. He's moved on, and so has Buffy even if she doesn't quite realize it yet. Great way to illustrate that!

And you have a nice, light touch with the dialog. I loved Spike's comment on how Buffy hopped up onto the vaulting horse!

Are you going to post this on your journal, too? It's easier to follow on LJ, and less with the pop-ups...

[ayinhara.livejournal.com]

What fun! Great setup. The Troika being behind the eggs nonsense makes as much sense as anything else offered. I love Brog, that's a really funny one. When do we get more?

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks! There should be more up tonight.

[itmustbetuesday.livejournal.com]

Hee! What a cute story. Will there be more soon?

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Chapter five should be up later tonight.

[kargrif.livejournal.com]

great job! i love it! can't wait to see how Angel takes Buffy 1)being a frog and 2) since this is spuffy i'm gonna assume it won't work for him...lol...can't wait for more!

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks! No, it won't work for him! More should be up soon.

[bearfacedcheek.livejournal.com]

more will be coming soon yes? Good morning fun on this grim rainy morning, thank you

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Definitely! Glad it helped your morning.

[tom-all-alones.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Love it. This story has made my horrible day so much brighter! Thanks,
~*helen*~

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad for it.

[just-sue.livejournal.com]

Loving this so far and looking forward to the rest. Thanks ever so.

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks! More should be up later.

[timeofchange.livejournal.com]

Wonderful story. I look forward to reading the rest of it!

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I read what you said about a beta. I do definitely need one. Any advice for where to find one?

[timeofchange.livejournal.com]

I don't actually write fanfic, so I'm not speaking from personal experience, but I've seen people post on their LJs asking for betas. If you like, I can ask some of the folks on my LJ how they find betas.

[basilio-the-cat.livejournal.com]

I love this :D

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[basilio-the-cat.livejournal.com]

BTW, I friended you

[manoah.livejournal.com]

This is just darn cute! A very nice fairy tale.

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!

[slaymesoftly.livejournal.com]

I love it! Please say there's more?

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks! There should be more up later tonight.

[jamalov29.livejournal.com]

Read the four chapters in a heartbeat! This is lovely, filled with emotions , and your characters voices are well done.
I'm looking forward to the next part(s) . :)

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. More should be up soon.

[ayinhara.livejournal.com]

Good to hear. It felt like there should be more. You definitely have my attention. I like the way you dispatched with Angel as the Great Love. Buffy's fear about loving Spike is very well done.

[amyrose13.livejournal.com]

This is so good. I am s sucker for stories that force Buffy to realize that she already loves Spike

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Me too ;)

[moscow-watcher.livejournal.com]

Love your story a lot.

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!

[etoile4.livejournal.com]

Just a bittersweet middle; The ending should be sweeter :)

[jamalov29.livejournal.com]

Chapter 5 was nice. I do hope Buffy is ready to be honest with herself and with her friends too.
I 'm glad to know that there is one (or two ) chapters left. :)

[ayinhara.livejournal.com]

I read chapter 5. Good going. I especially liked Dawn being so enthusiastic about Spike being Buffy's True Love. I look forward to how Buffy is going to deal with this startling and unwelcome information.

[botias.livejournal.com]

Cute story, glad you posted chapter 5.

[http://users.livejournal.com/opalescence_/]

I really liked this. Was that the end? Thank you for writing it.