2011-04-28 09:32 (UTC)
Ahh. So funny, and then so sad. I love all the bits of family. Everybody's family is weird on some level, but theirs is supernaturally so. (Also supernaturally understanding of each others needs, which is sorta sexy.) What a wonderful introduction to everybody at this stage.

The story might would flow more naturally if the final convo with Will and Buffy was set the morning after the party/welcome home. It would make Will's suffering last longer, but it would also explain his continued reticence with Taryn. Small thing in a lovely piece.
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