I'm enjoying the plot and pacing of this and your character voices are spot on. Poor Buffy, this mystical pregnancy just keeps getting more and more complicated and who wouldn't be freaked after sucking on old bandages? Ick cubed!
It's very entertaining to know that in canon Buffy's life was very complicated and kinda sucky, but fan fic can make it so much worse! I wish I had time to finish this up tonight, I'd like to know if the spawn's on fire! Okay, maybe one more chapter.
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2010-05-20 00:59 (UTC)It's very entertaining to know that in canon Buffy's life was very complicated and kinda sucky, but fan fic can make it so much worse! I wish I had time to finish this up tonight, I'd like to know if the spawn's on fire! Okay, maybe one more chapter.