This was excellent!!! The voices, the situation...I haven't had such a tasty egyptian scenery since Serious Moonlight. I read your explanation for the background story, and really, this works just fine as it is: with little observations you told enough that the plot was all there. It was extremely funny, and sometimes heartbreaking, and I loved the ending. How can I flatter---I mean praise you--- enough to get the sequel? Which will possibly be a longish story?
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2009-05-07 17:05 (UTC)The voices, the situation...I haven't had such a tasty egyptian scenery since Serious Moonlight. I read your explanation for the background story, and really, this works just fine as it is: with little observations you told enough that the plot was all there.
It was extremely funny, and sometimes heartbreaking, and I loved the ending.
How can I flatter---I mean praise you--- enough to get the sequel?
Which will possibly be a longish story?