This is a very intriguing start to your long-awaited novel. I like the direction it appears (at very brief acqauintance) to be going in and am looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Will send somewhat more detailed comment by email, if that's okay? Also, did you get my last one?
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2009-04-02 13:03 (UTC)Will send somewhat more detailed comment by email, if that's okay? Also, did you get my last one?