2008-05-17 07:16 (UTC)
This was surprisingly fresh, I liked your writing, the speaking voices were just right and there was a lot of interaction with various characters, which kept the narration very lively. It's always an interesting challenge when you writers include Spike's letters: no canon to help you there, and your letters, with the language more in line with the hidden personality than the constructed persona, were a very good part of the story. That part were Dawn gives her "practiced-in-front-of-the-mirror" look was not only very funny, but disturbingly realistic...I'll be looking for your other fics after this round of Seasonal!
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