Gah! So gorgeous! I love your story, it is *most* excellent. Although I think maybe you could out a comma after 'loved' in this sentence: Even dancing, which she had once loved betrayed her
::ducks and flees::
Although the fact that I am incapable of spelling kinda renders this pointless...
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ninetydegrees
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2006-03-28 17:54 (UTC)Even dancing, which she had once loved betrayed her
::ducks and flees::
Although the fact that I am incapable of spelling kinda renders this pointless...