To eager to read to do chapter by chapter feedback, sorry. This is fabulous and I can't wait for continuation. I am begging you to put aside the other WIPs (worthy as they are) and continue this gem.
Your Spike is so believable in his confusion and love and longing and fear. Your Buffy is also believable as she struggles with her wants, needs and fears. This all just feels right. You are really in the groove where the characters are concerned.
All of us who write are feedback whores *G*.....it's the only way we know we are connecting. You are so very gifted!
Kathleen already smart enough to have friended you *G*
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2006-03-15 22:40 (UTC)Your Spike is so believable in his confusion and love and longing and fear. Your Buffy is also believable as she struggles with her wants, needs and fears. This all just feels right. You are really in the groove where the characters are concerned.
All of us who write are feedback whores *G*.....it's the only way we know we are connecting. You are so very gifted!
Kathleen
already smart enough to have friended you *G*