Fic: Once Upon A Time

Hello to all!

I'm very pleased that we've started again and though posting on the second day is a little scary, I hope you enjoy what I've got for you.


Once upon a time, in a country far far away, a tiny girl with long blonde hair was a hero.

Only, not so long ago, and in this day and age of planes and really fast trains, it wasn’t so far away, either.

But she was quite short and her hair was long and blonde and she was most definitely a hero. She kept the world safe from monsters of all kinds: monsters with slime and monsters that mangled time, monsters with claws and monsters with big hairy paws, monsters that were very tall and monsters that were very small.

No matter what, she fought them all. And she always won.

There was one monster she fought with more than any other. They fought in alley-ways and factories, in broad daylight (once) and in the darkest part of the night (much more often), with weapons and words and it didn’t take long (in the grand scheme of things) before they weren’t fighting – quite so much. And they fell in love.

Of course, they realized they were in love at different times. The monster-who really-wasn’t-much-of-a-monster-at-all-anymore fell in love first. He didn’t know how to tell her, of course, and he went about it in a very bad manner. The hero didn’t believe him and she didn’t trust him. But the end of the world came, as it always did, and she learned that even monsters can be trusted. She trusted him with her sister and the hero did what heroes do and she saved the world.

But the world had to go on without her for a while and when it got her back, she wasn’t the same. She didn’t feel like a hero anymore and she didn’t know if she still wanted to be one. But the monster that loved her knew he still wanted her, more than anything. And that helped to bring her back, a little.

But monsters and heroes can’t be together easily and things got bad and this got dark and things got messy. The monster and the hero hurt each other, very badly, and the monster had to leave. He couldn’t be a monster -- even if he was barely one at all, anymore – and still love a hero. He went on a quest. And he came back not-a-monster. And he came back broken.

The hero saw how he had changed and she realized that she had changed too. She wasn’t the one who was falling apart: she was the one who had to glue the pieces back together. They found a way towards each other, slowly and painfully, but there wasn’t enough time. The world ended again and they stopped it, the hero and her sister and her friends and at her side, the not-a-monster. He died for the world, as she had died for it. She told him she loved him, and though he said he didn’t believe her she knew that there would be a time when he would believe. And they would be together.

But for the tiny blonde hero girl it seemed like a very long time. She didn’t think there was any way she would be able to see the not-a-monster that she loved again. And she mourned him and she cried and she leaned on her friends and slowly she made a place for him in her heart and she moved on. She hadn’t stopped loving him, but she didn’t stop living either.

The one day, she found out he was alive, and he was in trouble. She was needed. He needed her help.

She called her friends and told them of the trouble: the dragons, the portals, the end of the world – again. And she told them what she had to do and she asked them to help her.

They grab their weapons – the knight with one eye has a sword, as does the wise man. He also has his knowledge. The wise man’s apprentice, the hero’s sister, has an axe in one hand and in the other she carries a knife that will let her bleed and let them all travel to the side of the not-a-monster. The witch has no weapons, as all of the ones she uses ride inside and the hero’s twin, her darker half, the one who fights on the right hand side of the her, as the not-a-monster fights on the left, she has a knife, long bladed and curly, and she has her boots.

The hero has a scythe, red and strong and it sings with power. So does the hero, in her head, at the joy of the fight, the joy of the win.

The joy of her not-a-monster, back in the world.

Back to be loved.


And they all lived happily ever after.


Until the world ended again.


Medium: Fic
Rating: G
Pairing: Spuffy


Enjoy!

[identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
(squeezes this story like a teddy bear)

I LOVE this. I can't stop picturing illustrations for it, like Where the Wild Things Are. Wonderful, wonderful fairy tale language.
ext_15233: (Default)

[identity profile] prophecygirrl.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
Lyrical, wonderful. I wish I could have someone read it to me right before I fall asleep.

My favorite bedtime story.

[identity profile] cindergal.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
A lovely retelling of their tale! Thank you. :-)

[identity profile] botias.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Wildly cheers happy ending, goes to bed happy.

[identity profile] auntiero.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
This was worth waiting for! It had that lovely warm feel of a bedtime story. :) Thanks!

[identity profile] timeofchange.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful. I love the fairty-tale language.

[identity profile] zanthinegirl.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
Love this! What a clever idea. Really well done!

Adding this to favorites...

[identity profile] pluckyantihero.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
Aaawwwww!!!

[identity profile] evilawyer.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
Very entertaining. Love the last line.

[identity profile] bearfacedcheek.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 09:17 am (UTC)(link)
You made it. Cute little fic and a something a bit different.

Well done you
ext_7259: (Default)

[identity profile] moscow-watcher.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
Very beautiful, Spuffy fairy tale - awww!
kathyh: (Kathyh chosen)

[personal profile] kathyh 2006-03-03 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice. I particularly liked the description of them all as they went into battle at the end, and the last line.

[identity profile] basilio-the-cat.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 12:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Great work :D I love it!

[identity profile] tom-all-alones.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I absolutely adore this story. It's so simple and yet so true to what really happened. I really love the descriptions of Xander and Faith: they're perfect!

~*helen*~

[identity profile] jamalov29.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
That was absolutely lovely.
I liked those lines :He died for the world, as she had died for it. She told him she loved him, and though he said he didn’t believe her she knew that there would be a time when he would believe. And they would be together.

I'm a firm believer that they find a way to be together again. :)

[identity profile] spikereader.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely fairy-tale spuffy - I can see myself reading this to my children.
quinara: Spike and Buffy approaching 'their' tree in AYW. (Spuffy tree)

[personal profile] quinara 2006-03-03 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww... that was lovely.
gillo: (smooches)

[personal profile] gillo 2006-03-03 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that's lovely - sweet and touching and fairytale-like with a proper happy ending, for a while at least.

[identity profile] biggrstaffbunch.livejournal.com 2006-03-03 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Fairy-tale Spuffy! I'm a fan! I love the prospect of the Dark Prince of yesteryear Spike and the so-not-a-princess Buffy in a fairytale setting. And I LOVED the descriptions of the scoobs, especially my Xander as a knight. Squee!

[identity profile] itmustbetuesday.livejournal.com 2006-03-04 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! Very happy ever after, interesting use of Dawn as the Key at the end.
jerusha: (herospike; icon by eyesthatslay)

[personal profile] jerusha 2006-03-08 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
I loved this. It was such a perfect rendition of Spuffy-as-fairytale. Brilliant, really.

[identity profile] appomattoxco.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
That was sweet. I likeg it a lot.
ext_7180: (buffy-irvine_selphie-spuffy love is hard)

[identity profile] lmbossy.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
wonderful blend of the fairytale challenge and a Spuffy recap :)

[identity profile] mary5958.livejournal.com 2006-04-14 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Very enjoyable. Loved Dawn with the power and the ability to control it. I firmly believe that we need fairy tales, and the Buffy/Spike story is my favorite modern day one. Thank you for telling it in such a concise and wonderful fashion.

[identity profile] ashfrost2035.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. I love this story so very much, I can't even express it.