I think yours might be my favorite comments so far, because of the use of the phrase "unforgivable fluff". So true! It easily could have gone wrong, and I'm sure there are some people who would never stoop to read something that looks as if it's pandering so shamelessly. I hoped by announcing right up front that it's the modern equivalent of a shotgun wedding, that people would be clued in to the "not exactly a fairy princess" nature of this fic.

I think most women who have been through this ringer would appreciate the way Buffy can't get any dinner. Heh. Good catch. (My husband didn't notice that detail, naturally.) The vows and the Church of Coltrane are all part of my nefarious research machine. I love that part of writing these fics so much!

¡Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the award-winning comments. Well, I think they should get an award, anyway.