I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your story. The premise was something I've never read before. I loved it didn't have a happy end, it was raw and hard but emotionally fulfilling.
I'm sorry I'm not making sense. I haven't read a story so well constructed for a long time.
I hope you could write a sequel out of this. I think you left the door open for more.
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I'm sorry I'm not making sense. I haven't read a story so well constructed for a long time.
I hope you could write a sequel out of this. I think you left the door open for more.
Good job!