Such great individual voices, all looking at the same thing and yet seeing differences. Thank you! That's exactly what I was going for!
*tear* I miss Anya, don't you?
Shades of Spike the Slayer Killer Spike is, in a lot of ways, a very cyclical character, and he often revisits phrases; this was my attempt to redeem that line for him.
Pay attention ladies Exactly!
Question--I love that you picked out that exchange between Dawn and Spike. I was trying to work a bit of fanwank in there. I've never understood why Dawn would kick Buffy out of the house, and the explanation I've arrived at is that she was petrified Buffy would go and get herself killed and so this was her way of looking after her. Did that come across in this story, or was I too ambiguous?
Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I greatly appreciate it!
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*tear* I miss Anya, don't you?
Shades of Spike the Slayer Killer Spike is, in a lot of ways, a very cyclical character, and he often revisits phrases; this was my attempt to redeem that line for him.
Pay attention ladies Exactly!
Question--I love that you picked out that exchange between Dawn and Spike. I was trying to work a bit of fanwank in there. I've never understood why Dawn would kick Buffy out of the house, and the explanation I've arrived at is that she was petrified Buffy would go and get herself killed and so this was her way of looking after her. Did that come across in this story, or was I too ambiguous?
Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I greatly appreciate it!