Oh, I love this! The voices were just exactly right, and the dialogue is so fun! Plus, anyone who makes use of the joy that is Harmony--and her unicorns and balloons gets a huge thank you from me. And S5 is such a fun time; I love the Buffy/Spike dynamic there, and you really nailed it.
"It's our anniversary, Slayer," Spike murmured. Dark porch, sexy saving-the-day Spike — this was doing evil things to my panties. Not just bad, evil. And why was I wearing cute panties today, exactly? Because it's your anniversary, silly Buffy! When he said that, I went all melty.
"When it's worth it, Slayer," he said, "I do know how to wait." Fabulous.
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"It's our anniversary, Slayer," Spike murmured. Dark porch, sexy saving-the-day Spike — this was doing evil things to my panties. Not just bad, evil. And why was I wearing cute panties today, exactly? Because it's your anniversary, silly Buffy! When he said that, I went all melty.
"When it's worth it, Slayer," he said, "I do know how to wait." Fabulous.
Loved ever word.