Her thirty minutes of fumbling intimacy with Angel was starting to feel a lot like the memorable first-time thrill of eating peas. - best description EVER!

I'm very interested in reading the finish version of this when you post it. I love where Buffy is going with her thoughts...for the most part. I just want her to stop hurting Spike, and to believe in him.

And now I'm going to look for a way to tag this so I know when you post the finished version. Unless there's a list you can add me to...?