ext_7363 ([identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] seasonal_spuffy 2006-09-26 04:21 pm (UTC)

That first paragraph was a real attention grabber, and "I missed the squirrel" was a wonderful payoff. It made me laugh out loud. This ficlet flowed beautifully, and you nailed the voices.
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