Someone wrote in [community profile] seasonal_spuffy 2008-08-04 12:12 am (UTC)

Feedback on Tekubi, Chapter 04

An imperious finger and a little "hup!" noise forestalled his objections. Nice line, nice Buffy, and very nice characterisation. Determined Buffy, is nice Buffy :-)

Oooooooo! "'I love thee with the passion put to use / In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith,'" she recited. Poetic Buffy! That's usually Spike/William's line :-)

"We did. I know that. But we stopped, didn't we? You and me, we learned how not to hurt each other. How to care for each other. We were friends." Perceptive Buffy ... very nice indeed! I definitely like your Buffy :-)

Edelweiss

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